Thursday, February 24, 2011

to walk many more miles...



We walked miles together

Without speaking… I could feel the silence…

You remained there… like a feeling

Not just as person… I could feel my own existence

More with you…

Like some background music… not felt unless you pay attention

Yet it soothes you without you knowledge

I earlier thought it would have been better…

If you spoke… or start running suddenly…

In the middle of all those walks we had together

or did some wacky things…

but you remained you… and we grew together

and now I know this is best…

for me and you and both…

every little dream that I dream has you…

every aspiration ends in you…

you let me go to make me find you

again… and again… and yet again…

sometime to discover you from the bit I left you…

sometimes from the scratch…

sometime in blush of the cheeks… sometime in new painted wall

sometime inside a cozy duvet … sometime under a scoring sun…

you are the sweet and sour and pepper of my life

the very essence and flavor…

be my love forever…

9 comments:

Ellie said...

this is beautiful

vimaljude said...

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NinaLaZina said...

I love that photo and poem.

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NINE TAILS said...

It's poetry. Beautiful writing blogger :)

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